Photo Advice Please

PF
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Paul Furman
Dec 5, 2003
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At a family get together my cousin & I posed for this "40 years later" picture. It’s amazing how similar we look!! (I’m the baby) Notice I’ve got the same goofy smile and I’m fat and bald again, he has almost the same spiked haircut.

I forced the backgroud blur on the new photo. Should I rotate the old one so the door in the background left is not askew. I changed that from black to a similar gray.

Any advice for improving the composition technique? Placement of white matte, background color, etc? The second face in the old pic is blurred but I guess there is no need to repeat that. He wanted me to take the clothes line out of the old pic & put the new one on the old background but that looks like it would be tough to do and probably look fake anyways.

http://www.edgehill.net/2003-1963-paul-doug
-click the picture for a full size version

Thanks!

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Stephan
Dec 5, 2003
"Paul Furman" wrote in message
At a family get together my cousin & I posed for this "40 years later" picture. It’s amazing how similar we look!! (I’m the baby) Notice I’ve got the same goofy smile and I’m fat and bald again, he has almost the same spiked haircut.

I forced the backgroud blur on the new photo. Should I rotate the old one so the door in the background left is not askew. I changed that from black to a similar gray.

Any advice for improving the composition technique? Placement of white matte, background color, etc? The second face in the old pic is blurred but I guess there is no need to repeat that. He wanted me to take the clothes line out of the old pic & put the new one on the old background but that looks like it would be tough to do and probably look fake
anyways.
http://www.edgehill.net/2003-1963-paul-doug
-click the picture for a full size version

My two photographer’s cents:
Just leave everything as it is now. These are great photos, nice portrait light and the backgrounds are very graphic but not too busy. Maybe just crop the first pic to get rid of Doug,s hands. They open the picture to the bottom and two the left for no good reason, distracting from the real subjects.
Applying the same crop on the right picture would allow you to get rid of the lighter zone right of the pants hanging on the line.This will "close" the pic nicely.
Frame them side by side as you presented them on the webpage.I bet you everybody walking in front of this frame will have a nice comment.

Stephan
PF
Paul Furman
Dec 5, 2003
Thanks!

I think that works? It made sense when you described it anyways. Maybe if I switch sides then so it’s not falling off the page? Here it is:

http://www.edgehill.net/2003-1963-paul-doug/2003-Paul-Doug-2 .jpg and with the sides switched:
http://www.edgehill.net/2003-1963-paul-doug/2003-Paul-Doug-3 .jpg that’s better though we all liked the first orientation before… this seems to work now.

I’ve got a larger view of the new pic so maybe I could scale it down & edit out the hand on the left. I agree it’s distracting. I wonder if the laundry is now more obvious cropped to the edge. I could lighten that also from black to gray. Or just edit out the hand & leave everything else.

Stephan wrote:
"Paul Furman" wrote in message

At a family get together my cousin & I posed for this "40 years later" picture. It’s amazing how similar we look!! (I’m the baby) Notice I’ve got the same goofy smile and I’m fat and bald again, he has almost the same spiked haircut.

I forced the backgroud blur on the new photo. Should I rotate the old one so the door in the background left is not askew. I changed that from black to a similar gray.

Any advice for improving the composition technique? Placement of white matte, background color, etc? The second face in the old pic is blurred but I guess there is no need to repeat that. He wanted me to take the clothes line out of the old pic & put the new one on the old background but that looks like it would be tough to do and probably look fake

anyways.

http://www.edgehill.net/2003-1963-paul-doug
-click the picture for a full size version

My two photographer’s cents:
Just leave everything as it is now. These are great photos, nice portrait light and the backgrounds are very graphic but not too busy. Maybe just crop the first pic to get rid of Doug,s hands. They open the picture to the bottom and two the left for no good reason, distracting from the real subjects.
Applying the same crop on the right picture would allow you to get rid of the lighter zone right of the pants hanging on the line.This will "close" the pic nicely.
Frame them side by side as you presented them on the webpage.I bet you everybody walking in front of this frame will have a nice comment.
Stephan

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DosBoss57
Dec 5, 2003
On Fri, 05 Dec 2003 09:39:47 -0800, Paul Furman
wrote:

At a family get together my cousin & I posed for this "40 years later" picture. It’s amazing how similar we look!! (I’m the baby) Notice I’ve got the same goofy smile and I’m fat and bald again, he has almost the same spiked haircut.

I forced the backgroud blur on the new photo. Should I rotate the old one so the door in the background left is not askew. I changed that from black to a similar gray.

Any advice for improving the composition technique? Placement of white matte, background color, etc? The second face in the old pic is blurred but I guess there is no need to repeat that. He wanted me to take the clothes line out of the old pic & put the new one on the old background but that looks like it would be tough to do and probably look fake anyways.
http://www.edgehill.net/2003-1963-paul-doug
-click the picture for a full size version

Thanks!

Lemme guess…your cousin’s name is….er….aahh…..Doug…right???

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DosBoss57

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Ivan
Dec 6, 2003
I opened up your file and flipped the younger shot horizontally so the four of you were looking at each other. Then I cropped the right side of the mature picture so the black sleeve blended in with the second pair of pants in the young picture. Then I merged the two photos into one. It looked great, but I accidently deleted the result before I was able to upload it here. Sorry, trust me….it looked good. Flip the toddlers horizontaly…trust me…and crop out the pants and the big hand. "Paul Furman" wrote in message
At a family get together my cousin & I posed for this "40 years later" picture. It’s amazing how similar we look!! (I’m the baby) Notice I’ve got the same goofy smile and I’m fat and bald again, he has almost the same spiked haircut.

I forced the backgroud blur on the new photo. Should I rotate the old one so the door in the background left is not askew. I changed that from black to a similar gray.

Any advice for improving the composition technique? Placement of white matte, background color, etc? The second face in the old pic is blurred but I guess there is no need to repeat that. He wanted me to take the clothes line out of the old pic & put the new one on the old background but that looks like it would be tough to do and probably look fake
anyways.
http://www.edgehill.net/2003-1963-paul-doug
-click the picture for a full size version

Thanks!
PF
Paul Furman
Dec 6, 2003
Thanks!

I couldn’t get it lo look good merged/touching but I like the mirror idea and got rid of the clothes line & other distractions (quick hack job that I’ll have to redo full size).

I added that below on the page.
And I showed the same crop unmirrored which also works well. I think the mirrored is more friendly and less mechanical/duplicated looking but sort of surreal <g>.

Ivan wrote:
I opened up your file and flipped the younger shot horizontally so the four of you were looking at each other. Then I cropped the right side of the mature picture so the black sleeve blended in with the second pair of pants in the young picture. Then I merged the two photos into one. It looked great, but I accidently deleted the result before I was able to upload it here. Sorry, trust me….it looked good. Flip the toddlers horizontaly…trust me…and crop out the pants and the big hand. "Paul Furman" wrote in message

http://www.edgehill.net/2003-1963-paul-doug
PF
Paul Furman
Dec 6, 2003
Yeppers!

DosBoss57 wrote:
http://www.edgehill.net/2003-1963-paul-doug

Lemme guess…your cousin’s name is….er….aahh…..Doug…right???
//Õ¿Õ\\

DosBoss57

Imagine all the people living life in peace !

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