anybody want to give some critique to my work?

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Jan 11, 2004
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does anybody want to give some critique to my pictures?
I mostly work with manipulations, made in Photoshop.

My pictures can be found at my website: http://www.bull.frac.dk

Regards
Morten

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Stephan
Jan 11, 2004
You seem to have good pictures but:
1) Takes way too many clicks to get anywhere
2) Trendy, minuscule fonts suck
3) You need to find a server on a faster connection.

Stephan

"Morten Bull" wrote in message
does anybody want to give some critique to my pictures?
I mostly work with manipulations, made in Photoshop.

My pictures can be found at my website: http://www.bull.frac.dk
Regards
Morten
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Husky
Jan 11, 2004
On 11 Jan 2004 11:43:02 -0800, (Morten Bull) wrote:

does anybody want to give some critique to my pictures?
I mostly work with manipulations, made in Photoshop.

My pictures can be found at my website: http://www.bull.frac.dk

Not so much a critique as just an observation. Full moon.. The stars shining behind the clouds are wrong. There should be some dispersion, but they are as sharp as those in plain view. It’s like those stars are in front of the clouds, and we know that isn’t happening. Not with any kind of optical illusions.

And the stars in plain view. Not really sure but it seems so vacant. All the stars are the same size, and seem to be the same intensity as though they’re all the same distance. Even as black as the sky is at night, it’s still flooded with pinpricks of varying intensity lights. Even more so on such a clear night.

And last would be the light from the moon itself. It looks more like the light you’d see from some headlights. The light source [moon] is top right. The light on the bridge seems to be originating from me as headlights or directly overhead. But can’t explain why it peters out directly in front of me.

The light would actually be stronger right in front of me than 100 yards down the bridge.
It looks [on the bridge] like the light source is directly over head. Guess the light is just too sharp… The light from the moon would also be dispersed no sharp edges.

But I like the image..

Here’s an idea that I’ve just recently seen. Sundown clear blue sky, white clouds. What’s so odd about that. I’ve only seen it twice but the clouds were split like one of those kitchen towels or the U.S. Flag hung sideways.

BBBBWWWBBBBWWWBBBBWWW
BBBBBBWWWBBBBWWWBBBBWWW
BBBBWWWWWBBBBWWWBBBBWWW
BBBBWWWBBBBWWWWWBBBBBWWW

B = Sky W = Cloud
This is florida so I assume it had more to do with heat updrafts and wind currents. It can be raining 5 feet away from me and I can stay dry outside watching it.. That’s happened plenty of times.
Florida may actually be the Bermuda Triangle.

The clouds were more like rising (though just hovering) than flowing left – right, right – left

more pix @ http://members.toast.net/cbminfo/index.html
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Roberto
Jan 12, 2004
A lot of nice work in there !!

Jamber.

"Morten Bull" wrote in message
does anybody want to give some critique to my pictures?
I mostly work with manipulations, made in Photoshop.

My pictures can be found at my website: http://www.bull.frac.dk
Regards
Morten
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Husky
Jan 12, 2004
On Sun, 11 Jan 2004 18:08:28 -0500, Husky wrote:

Found the bridge image later. Nicer…
But I like the image..

more pix @ http://members.toast.net/cbminfo/index.html
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The Data Rat
Jan 12, 2004
Very nice and impressive!

The site was REALLY slow loading though so it wasn’t as much fun as it should have been to peruse it.

"Morten Bull" wrote in message
does anybody want to give some critique to my pictures?
I mostly work with manipulations, made in Photoshop.

My pictures can be found at my website: http://www.bull.frac.dk
Regards
Morten
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David Kershaw
Jan 13, 2004
You probably have some nice pictures, but I lost patience waiting for the downloads – it’s very slow!
"Morten Bull" wrote in message
does anybody want to give some critique to my pictures?
I mostly work with manipulations, made in Photoshop.

My pictures can be found at my website: http://www.bull.frac.dk
Regards
Morten
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bull85dk
Jan 13, 2004
"David Kershaw" …
You probably have some nice pictures, but I lost patience waiting for the downloads – it’s very slow!
"Morten Bull" wrote in message
does anybody want to give some critique to my pictures?
I mostly work with manipulations, made in Photoshop.

My pictures can be found at my website: http://www.bull.frac.dk
Regards
Morten

Thanks to all of you…
Funny… The speed is okay when i use the site…
But it aint the fyrst time people say it…
I’ll buy a domain and some server space very soon :o)

And thanks for your comments about my pictures…
I know about the stars and the clouds.
And i i’ll not make that mistake again! :o)

Regards
Morten
http://www.bull.frac.dk
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larrybud2002
Jan 13, 2004
(Morten Bull) wrote in message news:…
does anybody want to give some critique to my pictures?
I mostly work with manipulations, made in Photoshop.

My pictures can be found at my website: http://www.bull.frac.dk

Drop the TWO splash screens. Very annoying. Why not put your "About" section as your home page?

Speaking of your "About" section, I would have someone whose native language is English proof read it. There are some grammar mistakes in there.
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larrybud2002
Jan 13, 2004
(Morten Bull) wrote in message news:…
does anybody want to give some critique to my pictures?
I mostly work with manipulations, made in Photoshop.

My pictures can be found at my website: http://www.bull.frac.dk
Regards
Morten

Oh, it’s also slow for me. However, this could because of where it’s hosted. I never even got to the photos.
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Roberto
Jan 14, 2004
Yeah, I’m on Broadband and it was slow for me too !

"Larry Bud" wrote in message
(Morten Bull) wrote in message
news:…
does anybody want to give some critique to my pictures?
I mostly work with manipulations, made in Photoshop.

My pictures can be found at my website: http://www.bull.frac.dk
Regards
Morten

Oh, it’s also slow for me. However, this could because of where it’s hosted. I never even got to the photos.

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